When Counterpart launched its first episode two full months before we’d get to see the second, it seemed a fresh and original concept. A gripping idea of an alternate universe accessible only from a subterranean door under a grey, Kafka-esque Berlin government building.

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Justin Mark’s pilot hit the necessary beats very well. I felt genuine shock as J.K. Simmons’ Howard Silk met his counterpart from the other world. I empathised with him when visiting his wife’s hospital bedside and I physically dodged the bullets when Baldwin tried to kill her.

Episode two was an exciting, emotional rollercoaster which concentrated on aforementioned beautiful, leather-clad assassin Baldwin and her even more beautiful violin-playing counterpart from our world, both played by Sara Serraiocco.

Two episodes in and Counterpart had successfully set up an incredibly interesting thematic question; What had happened to Howard in each timeline to make him so meek and mild in our world yet a bastard in the other? It also raises many philosophical ideas surrounding nature or nurture, and destiny versus free will.

As great as the set-up premise was, as we followed J.K. Simmons between the two mirror universes, Counterpart became more and more confusing. At one point during episode three, I realised that I was only still watching due to Simmon’s acting clout (and the direction and editing) as he switched between the two versions of Howard Silk.

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Then the reason I was so confused and slightly bored struck me. Aside from the mirror world’s citizens being more prone to disease (an afterthought, somewhat lazily only introduced in episode three), there was no difference between the two interdimensional locations.

The only tangible variable was Howard Silk.

Instead of the New Berlin / Old Berlin imagery suggested by the promo posters, both worlds were as flat, grey and moribund as each other. Yes, the cityscape was slightly different in one universe – the telecom tower way off in the distance is omnipresent and a couple of modern CGI buildings punctuate the mirror world’s skyline but that’s not nearly enough difference. An audience shouldn’t be asking “hang on, which universe are we in right now?”, especially an audience member as sophisticated as myself.

WE NEED TO BE ABLE TO DIFFERENTIATE BETWEEN MIRROR WORLDS

The lesson to be learnt here is this: If your story features two mirror universes, they must be distinct enough so the audience can tell which world we’re in. Television is an audio-visual medium, but Counterpart’s producers have made zero use of colour and light or sound to differentiate between the two universes and that is a crime.

Make one universe bright and sunny and the other drab and rainy. Watch and learn from the creatives in your marketing department, because their promo posters do exactly that. Go and watch J.J. Abrams’ excellent Fringe to see how to mirror world-build. Use differing modes of transport, The Prisoner style Mini Mokes, Zeppelin airships, use blue and orange filters if you have to.

Counterpart’s night scenes contain even fewer differences. Here, the trick is to make one universe loud and fast and exciting, dripping with sexy imagery, neon clubs and Euro techno. Instead of two dystopian-looking dystopias, making one of them far more desirable would add another layer to the story – specifically that one of the Howards would want to live in that universe and not return home – and hey presto – you have a B-story or three-episode mini-arc that writes itself right there. You’re welcome.

The self-same mistake has been made with each world’s characters. I’m not even sure how many characters from both worlds we met – not just because their personalities were so similar in each world, but because different actors looked the same. Just as the Berlin skies are perma-grey, every male character has the same brown hair and wears the same suits, leading my puzzled internal monologue to ask “Is that the same dude as before? Why’s he suddenly got a French accent?”

Compare and contrast to Olivia Dunham and her doppelganger in Fringe. 

No confusion here. Which Olivia is our Olivia doesn’t even need a second thought because it’s so intuitive.

Counterpart is well directed – in terms of physical geography; we always know who’s who and where they are in relation to each other (particularly impressive due to the two Howards and necessary superimposition, multiple scenes etc) but what good is that if we don’t know which frigging universe we’re meant to be in?

It’s basic visual storytelling. Get that wrong and I’m not interested no matter how fresh your idea is.

I know Germany is fucking bland, I lived there but come on, Justin Marks. This is fiction, not reality.

Counterpart continues on Starz and will produce a second season regardless of what I say!

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